I saw your message from the RPG Maker discord and I got curious because you said you had no dialogue in your game.
It was a short, but fun little story. I really like the character animations. You did a great job with them! Honestly, you should consider getting rid of the pictures. Since every picture was made by a different artist, it detracts from the immersion. The body language from the sprites spoke louder than the pictures too.
I think you should add gameplay as well. You can design gameplay elements that don't require text or tutorials. Maybe some puzzles? Just a thought.
Overall, good job!